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CHAPTER 01 Page 07

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Time to briefly meet Ellie's parents. I'm really pleased with these backgrounds, they took a while but I feel like they work. Please tell me what you think
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First off, hello! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Secondly, nice work on this, I like me a good comic and this looks great.

The panels look alright, so good work on that, I can never get panels done right. But you did well! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
And your grasp of perspective is spot on, epic. I love how you did it, looks fantastic.

In the first panel however, the mother's hand seems a bit off on the frying pan. But its barely noticeable so that can slide.
Now, in the next panel with the father I couldn't help but notice his foot, it looks like its a right foot on his left leg, but that can be fixed, his hand is also the same, the finger, again, fixable.

Overall I love how this came out and I love your comic style.
Good work on this, keep it up my friend ^^ and stay frosty <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>